The head was beaten with a mace
Pain was written all over the face.
It was bleeding through the nose
going through a life full of woes.
Tired and weak are the legs
not ready to walk the path plagued
with dreadful hostility.
Broken but still heavy is the heart
and the mind is being ripped apart.
Does that sum up what you are going through?
Loads and loads of words spoken
But I kept my ears closed and deaf.
Now,
All my ears are ready and wide open
But you are dumb.
Speak up!
A six required of the last ball?
Let the batsman know. Make the call.
I'm ready to reach out and be your help-line
but do not want to cross the line.
You speak up!
Before you break down.
Get ready to shed the scar tissues.
and be eager to try new avenues.
Gear up and keep going
Cheer up and keep smiling!
5 comments:
Oooooh.
well written.
There is nothing more peaceful than opening up and talking freely with your dear ones.
When someone vents make sure you give back some of your thoughts.
If you just listen and do not give any suggestions people say that you are rude and it was waste of time to open up with you.
Wierd world and obscure relationships
I'm sorry but I couldnt really make out what that was all about ?
Couldja explain ?
@Cindrella:
aah! try now and let me know if it makes sense.
If you dont get it, I will explain you :-)
I think the first part :
**The head was beaten ......what you are going through?**
Talks of the the usual gory part of life's blisters.
Then,
**Loads and loads of words ....Speak up!**
Means, that the two never communicated when the need was.
**A six required of the last ball?
Let the batsman know. Make the call.**
Toally lost you here.
**I'm ready to reach out and be your help-line
but do not want to cross the line.
You speak up!
Before you break down.
Get ready to shed the scar tissues.
and be eager to try new avenues.
Gear up and keep going
Cheer up and keep smiling!**
This I get, but again the context varies here.
I wanna know the whole idea behind it. The overall concept, and how you related it to the lines you made.
Cinderella:
I have sent an e-mail to you :-)
You got most of it right!
Smart [!!!]
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